YouthGod
I'm enjoying the book so far, but this seems really lame. You say there's no plot hole, but how do you explain the 26 gangsters coming across the MC like this? It's been over a week that he hasn't been in the area. So 26 gangsters have been roving the neighbourhood looking for him for over a week? They wouldn't waste their time like that.
I kinda just got give up here. The inconsistent mc not wanting to do simple things that his system helps him with versus the illuminati book now turning a random person into a worshipper shortly after a group of 26 gangsters casually walking the street in the city in modern times for over a week looking for one person with no police taking notice the I suppose future fighting of aliens and of course the many other confusing and nonsensical factors that compromise the story every few chapters right after the story starts making since again. Gotta just give up and wish you the best of luck at this point. Keep up the hard work.
Reading the comments and then the Like that the Author give to the one that praise the chap os kinda disappointing, that just tell me the immature mentality that the Author use to take the comments. That will be reflected in the chaps without doubt and is sad... potential wasted again in another novel
really ?!!! this plot hole is too big it's cringe คือแบบ เอาแบบนี้จริงดิ?! ใจอยากอ่านต่อเพราะโครงเรื่องแต่ก็แอบกังวลกับplot holes อ่ะ คือตั้งแต่ที่พี่กะน้องคู่เก็บความลับแล้ว ที่พระเอกไม่บอกเรื่องระบบแต่บอกเรื่องยาเอยอะไรเอย ไหนๆบอกมาขนาดนี้แล้วก็บอกบอกให้หมดเถอะพ่อคุณ เรื่องที่น้องสาวปิดเรื่องเป็นนักเขียนอีก เพื่อ?! อยากเซอไพรส์พี่แต่ทำซะยังกะเรื่องคอขาดบาดตาย 🤔 อ่านต่อค่ะ อยากรู้คนเขียนจะไปต่อยังไง I'll read it because I want to know how author will fill these plot holes 😌
I think the author was drinking when he made this chapter, awesome premise, and then throwing random trash. It’s so frustrating these people have great everything and then they just they. They throw random freaking stuff and it makes it garbage. This is a trash fire. This is actually really sad. The only reason I’m reading it is because it’s free, I will leave a very, very very honest opinion