John_Doever
I just want to say, whoever your editors are. They are doing a great job. The story flows smoothly, no grammar that distracts from the situation. Nothing repeated by accident. All in all very well written. Storyline is fun, and the feeling of calm before the storm is great at building anticipation and interest. Definetly one of the top tier novels on this site in terms of writing quality alone. Thank you for your work.