The Forgotten Elder God (Dropped)

hmmmm, I suppose I'm gonna invest myself on this. Ngl, like the most of us, the main thing that attracted us all was the cover soooooo imma wait for that

First of all , if he is omnipotent, he can do everything. So he should already be able to control all his power... It's just baffling how disconnected this character is with the powers and identity he represents. His story simply disgusts the concept of mystery from lovecraft's horror tales.

Someone who finds comfort when reading Lovecraftian Mythos... Definitely a normal human.....................................................

have not read it yet but am shure it is good also there better be overlord I don't see much of that so it would be good to see another......

More chapters author san please quickly update chapters it is frustrating to wait for so much time for a chapters please increase the speed of update

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Hoh? Intriguing... I shall watch your career with great interest. You got me hooked on 'Azathoth'. ●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●●‿●

The first 2 chps were good. I just hope there won’t be a huge tragedy for mc and don’t make mc hide so much of his powers. He should be able to trash everyone as soon as he controls his powers so it’s fine showcasing his strength. Author should update more too as t’s too slow. Other than that, good job and continue.

Really good story so far can't wait to see what happens next but could the updates be a bit more frequent that's all for me.................

The mc should be an outer god but he was born at high class. He was born with his powers locked which doesn't make sense because one of his wishes was that his body and soul could handle his powers and that the system would help him control them so why are they locked? I should be called Born in dxd with outer god powers because he's not an outer god he just has there powers. This review doesn't have anything to do with the story telling or writing quality and such.

For the first time, the Ancient gods appear in the story "The Punishing Fate over Sarnath", where Lovecraft first calls the deities "Ancient Gods" (Eng. Old Gods), and then "Elder Gods" (English Elder Gods). In subsequent works: "The Call of Cthulhu", "The Horror of Dunwich", "The Whisperer in the Dark", "The Ridges of Madness" and "The Shadow over Innsmouth" — Lovecraft uses the name "The Ancients" (Eng. Old Ones) and "Great Old Ones" (Eng. Great Old Ones). In the stories "The Last Experience" and "Buried with the Pharaohs" Lovecraft uses the name "Ancient Gods". In Lovecraft's work, the "Elder Gods" are opposed to both the "Great Ancients" and the "Outer Gods". Smith often referred to Lovecraft's Ancient gods along with his "Outer Gods", ruled by Azathoth, the "blind idiot God" who occupies a position in the center of infinity.

One of the best DXD fanfic I have ever read

good job, keep it up. though, i would recommend you show him in a battle where he has to try. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

don't drop please!!! .

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Hope there are not like 1 million wives or something...maximum 25.. more and its too much.......................................................................But it is nice........................

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••••••••••••••••••••••••Nice dxd fic•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• ••••••••••••••••I hope this fic continues until the end••••••••••••••••• •••and hopefully the author is always enthusiastic to write this story••••

It was good while it lasted 👍 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

Put more Chapter ++++++