Comments of chapter undefined of The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
Xenon_graves
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you asked for suggestions and so I've been trying to think of suggestions to give you now I do not know what timeline you wish to bring him into but if you're going to give him a timeline that it would be good for him I suggest just before Queen of Dragons gets married you should be having your MC save her so she marries him of course they go to save the slaves and whatnot also make sure that you have guns I think that would make him very powerful in that world as insurance after all he can use a sword as his main weapon but if he's in a hard spot or more enemies, you can have his guns out and start shooting as far as magic is concerned I would tied up to completing his first world with space and metal magic like teleporting space Magic will allow him to teleport to other places making it easier for him to travel as well as holding equipment and metal controlling magic would allow him to make his weapons and armor without having to resort to other people making for him and giving away valuable information also it would make him have abilities to get wealthy if you're going to have him as a commoner he can use metal manipulation to find rare Metals such as gold and silver and mint it into coins for himself to buy whatever he wants any case hope these suggestions help if not oh well I tried
Author, in the future world, namely Game of Thrones, can you give some brief description or explanations about the world/places and their original characters there? I read this 'cause i know some stuff about the walking dead but i don't know anything about GOT. Now, some may say "Just don't read this," i can do that but i don't want to because i like this book so much. It's very entertaining, at least for me.
I think it will be great if he has some skill, perk, bonus, etc. for "completing" that world, something that would be op if used properly kind of like this skill called "Boiling" that can boil liquids which many would think is useless for combat but can, like I said, boil liquids including blood; effective but like boiling it is a slow process.
Is the MC allowed to take stuff from The walking dead there ? . Is the MC keeping his body or he is having a new one made there ? In case the MC goes there I would suggest him to go to a gold bank and take a few ingots to be able to buy stuff. A few knifes and a machete to be sure. If he is starting with nothing more than his body.... well that would suck XD . Abilities : [ Fire breath ] -> like a flamethrower but depends on the lvl [Draconic armor] : covers a part of the body with dragon scales to avoid lethal damage [Draconic eyes]: Increases the eyesight to 400 meters->1Km depending on the lvl [ Paranormal intuition ] : Passive skill that allows the MC to predict life threatening attacks ( arrows and such ) once a day. [ Rune craftsman ] : capable of crafting basic runes with basic effects ( example : granade rune, molotof rune, flash granade rune, XD .. something like that or a skill to imbue weapons with a little magic for extra damage ).
hey author i hope before you make the MC leave this world atleast build the prison like castle using those fences as the foundation, its only missing is a lot of plank for the shape and cement to create concrete walls. then go to local library because i know nobody gonna go there or steal anything unless they are looking for a survival book and how to make makeshift tools.