I think the story is okay,but with bad character,
Author you are doing a good job ,but instead of writing many stories which are trial ,why don't you perfect 1 or 3 first,,
like all your stories don't have raw materials.
Raw materials helps people to vote because they will somehow know what to expect.
.....this story if it is slow like this very bad very bad.i don't encourage for people to vote,alot of abuse, rape,woman dignity is not valued,....try to make the character of the FL to have a strong hold.