Ghostorie
This is a very promising novel! So glad to be reading it. The use of adjectives is precise and the vocabulary is wide but it can be understood easily :) Pd: I sound like a language teacher but I'm just an Argentinian girl trying to make a good critique of this amazing chapter. :) Congratulations!
This was truly amazing! I can’t tell what you did better, making us feel what Joan felt especially with the detailed language you used to illustrate her pain and confusion or making us wonder what happened next and providing so many details so we can formulate our own guesses. Really really well done 🌚
Oh my god! I love this. The writing style is lovely. It’s very eloquently written and it holds a lot of mystery. As a curious person I keep wanting to see more. I can’t wait to see how you develop each character further. This story has a unique concept and I’ve never read anything quite like it. ❤️ 10/10 recommend reading.