Author, the writing is great, but it does need some improvements. Some of things I noticed is that the words are kinda blunt, just getting to the point to quickly. Idk what I am saying as I am not an expert but I do hope you do consider my words. ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
"And why does he always reads books and practices magic even though he had never once succeeded?" Corey said that about the mc but right before that he had said "he needs to start working hard" 😂
