Comments of chapter undefined of Sold To An Alpha

Didn't expect this when I read the synopsis. Seems like she wouldn't mind murdering someone now. I like it. Pretty dark.

Good, I like her crazy behaviour. Go smash em girl!

Well that was an amazing start!!! I love the crazy!!🤷👏👏👏

a quick introduction to the plot

you go, gurl!!

Your word choice is great and first chp is really mind gripping ♥️♥️

Incredible.

OMG! LOVED THE CHAPTER

I wouldn't stress about your grammar too much. the only thing that stood out that bad was the insistence on calling what was either a bat OR a stick a "bat stick". Otherwise it read just fine

Crazy chapter, Leia is going insane though...jeez... is she gonna kill Mr Aldopho?

First chapter and I'm seeing Hailey Queen.... this will be a good a read 😏

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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

okay, I was skeptical at first to read it since I wasn't sure what was going on in first few paras but now that I'm one chapter in I'm starting to enjoy it more!

Won't say i was expecting a crazy, manly fmc.

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tbh it's rare for me to get hooked by the first chapter. But Congrats author you have done it😏😌💖✨