A great story overall. I will admit I am writing this review pretty early on (Only 10 chapters), but it is looking like a promising story. The premise of the plot is nice, and I can't wait for more action to begin. My two negatives thus far are 1; the time to wait for new chapters is quite a long time considering how short the chapters are, and 2; There needs to be more character development. Once again, this is early on in the plot, so it might happen later, but so many years have already passed in the story yet we barely get any details about the main casts lives. I need flashbacks into their childhoods, talk about their training, their thoughts, etc. Despite my negatives, this is looking extremely promising, and I have enjoyed reading thus far so kudos to the author.
