Promising, great background, nice storyline, a little sexist about the king having lost his back bone due to the Queen's death, a bit over hyped there entirely destroying any form of kingly aura or vibe he's meant to give and completely tarnishing his future feats to the audience, if he's gonna be a big part of the novel it's gonna take a massive feat to redeem his image back. There's more I'd like to say but oh well. Over all nice book.
P.S The immortal.