TL;DR: This story is really good, just that the prologue doesn't match the rest of the story.
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This is really great author, and I'm really enjoying it!
The story progresses and flows pretty well, and the characters have been developing quite nicely so far-
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My only problem though... Would be the prologue.
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Not because it's absolutely terrible, but because it kinda.... doesn't fit the tone of the story?
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I mean, if the story after reincarnation would be in a more 'serious' drama action-packed world, then it would be fine, but so far it seems like just a slice of life-ish story set in places like Oregariu etc.
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Once again, not that I hate it, just that I think that the prologue doesn't mesh well together with the current story.
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But as always, keep up the good work!-