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Comments of chapter undefined of Surviving the Apocalypse While Being Tempted by an Elf and a Dark Elf

AndrewMurry
AndrewMurryLv15AndrewMurry

it took me awhile to notice but every one of your mcs is severely antisocial and while some have actual reasons for it most dont. I get you want something to work towards but this is kind of becoming a crutch for you all your main characters end up with is like 3-4 people they can stand to be around with the exception of billy

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

LordDaoThief
LordDaoThiefLv15LordDaoThief

ThaNk You