The_Hanged_Man1
I think the problem with this chapter is a lot of drama, but without development, like the story of his childhood friend, you tried to make a tragic story, which didn't turn out bad, but the part where you blame her is like this for the mc it gets kinda bad, like, what is the mc to blame? either he helped her get better and died in a future accident, or he trained to survive, and in nature of any kind prioritize survival, also the fact that she was "just a friend", and another uncomfortable thing is how people he you haven't known for a week or hours they keep calling you irresponsible, like someone you met today starts saying that ru is irresponsible it's your fault for everything going wrong in a girl's life, I would be upset for sure.