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Comments of chapter undefined of Symbiotic Cultivation: Night Stalker

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FoolUniverse
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Its a interesting start and its unique world but you need to make the building of the story smoother and more easy to understand and a few grammatical correction , other then that i cant wait to see how this story will turn into , good luck and nice work đŸ‘đŸ»đŸ˜

_BakuSaiga_
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I'll try editing this, thank you very much.

CreatorOfTheVoid
CreatorOfTheVoidLv14CreatorOfTheVoid

i cant read today because am kinda in a bad mood but ill try later

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zero777
zero777Lv3zero777

An interesting start

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Anime_End
Anime_EndLv3Anime_End

Okay, i can see a few grammatical error here nd there but it's a good start .

CreatorOfTheVoid
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