Well, since it is the original author, who's posting this story, may I trouble you to delete the other review I've posted?
Now, on to the review:
Honestly, the story is awesome, I've read everything that's posted on ff dot net up until now and it really did not disappoint.
Writing quality is fine, mistakes are sparse and all around, it's a fun read.
From time to time, there's some awkward phrasing, but it doesn't really detract from immersion that much.
Story development and character design get 4 stars from me.
The reason for that is the mc.
I get why he is like that.
I understand, that what he experienced is traumatising on the best of days.
It just gets frustrating sometimes.
I probably shouldn't remove points for something like that, but that's the way I feel.
Updating stability was fine for ff dot net, the chapters are ginormous which helps a lot.
World background. Now, this is where the author shines.
He adds to an already expansive world in a believable manner, adds little nuggets of real, factual information and explains in a believable manner how it could apply in a world of superpowered beasties.
This, he does in a superb manner, which elevates the story.
In conclusion, I can only recommend the story for pokemon enthusiasts.
Cheers!
