A great plot loves the characters, it's a book you wouldn't want to miss in a lifetime, Although they are a few mistakes still that do count the plot made me forget all about the mistakes and only focus on the read, great work, please edit a few chapters !!
The author's prowess in the language is like that of a commander. The story is slowly revealed one by one in the right pacing. Narrations are of the best quality. I can rest assured that this will become better and better as we read further. Keep it up! Your story is lit! [img=recommend]
Very good story and easy to understand. The author has put a lot of effort. I will be waiting for more chapters ahead ππππ The story has blown my mindπ Keep it up, Authorπππ
I really love the name Yuna I think it was spelled. I have never seen a name like this before and it makes the story really unique. So far I kinda like the maid, I know they arent the main character but just kinda how they graze the chapter with their character is chilly. As for the plot im very excited for chap 15!!.
OH MY GOD(GOD OF ANIME) This IS A MASTER, the story is amazing, and the way he torturous the MC is beautiful (Yes im a sad-ist),they say i abuse my MC a lot, but man hes on a diffrent level the torture was not even started that i loved it, THank you truck-kun for this wonderfull master piece , a SOLID 5
This novel is very well written with the characters being very well fleshed out i totally recommend if your a fan of the isekia genre with a little mystery
Actually a nice story and book. I like it... ......[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I love the plot so far! Only a few chapters in and Iβm already hooked! I also love your use of words, although some adjectives seem to be used either incorrectly or insufficiently. Itβs okay though, you can always edit and correct mistakes when you reread. Iβd also love to know a bit about Yunaβs previous life and about who she was before she reincarnated but Iβm most excited to find out where this new life leads her to, though it seems to be off to a rocky start already. Overall, pretty good story with an intriguing plot!
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Oh man, this cool. I'd love your plot, character, and your writing style. Well, I am just... I am just, aa... Yeah, just like that. The point is, this novel is really amazing for me. Yeah, good job, author!!
This book is a great read. The narratives were clear and can be easily perceived by the readers. The characters has there own personalities which made them unique from each other and likeable. The world back ground is written well. Overall this book is 5/5 to me. Great Work author!
The author truly knows how to captivate the reader with masterfully written chapters. The premise of the story is intriguing and leaves me craving for more. I'm really hoping that the story gets the attention it deserves.
I usually don't like the isekai concept but from what I just read this is a different idea defo recommend it to anyone who wants to read an isekai but doesn't want some cliche bs
The first chapter has definitely sucked me in! It was really good and I really like what the writer has done. I really wish the writer is able to update and upload more chapters but this is a good story.
Really liked the way you have been expressive in describing the emotions of a character and also the scene... along with it, the storyline's reallyy cool. Way to go mateπ
Story progression is very balanced and good! I need more! From the writing you can tell the author has a clear idea in mind with this novel, its a brilliant flower waiting to bloom, hoping they post faster so we can see how the story plays out :)
The author was indeed a good writer and an imaginative one as well. He has this good plot.. that can surely attract the attention of readers.
Good book, the story and writing style is interesting. This book has the potential to be an even better book if the author of this book adds some details for characters, places, transitions, etc.
