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I'm actually pretty happy with how this novel is turning out, hopefully I can keep it up! Enjoy reading, it's worth it, take my word for it,

The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests

📖 [img=recommend] this story is just perfect for me, it's not long but it's quite pleasant to read, it doesn't have very complicated concepts but it's also not as simple as it looks and makes you think a lot, the plot and characters really make you empathize and emerge in the story even though it's short, I'm grateful to the author for creating this wonderful story and I'll never forget it 👍🏼😊🇧🇷

This book has an interesting story line, some funny moments, the author uses a great way to discribe the surroundings and little details of what's happening and carefully chooses words. I'm excited to read ad more!

It's a good novel author.

It is a beautifully written short story that is unique and rather interesting would recommend the variety of things that happen make the story extremely interesting thanks dear author for the gift