Comments of chapter undefined of I Hate Systems
I Hate Systems
Overlord_Venus
Chapter comments32
trying something and failing. its a simple thing but oddly enough most authors miss the importance and meaning of this. as a character goes through his cycle in the novel the best way to make a character feel alive ia through trial and error. now why am i bringing this up why certainly he suffered infact almost being assimilated by the system he got saved (very reasonable) but had the entire plot of the system the way back home and most likely in the next chapter how to deal with/kill systems revealed to him hence eliminating the trial and error that we humans so empathise with. so far 3.5/5
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