Train King
As much as I like harem I don't care for trash plot and writing. I'll sign off now.
So far you have put more detail and trying to put character plots together. I say you are doing much better, than most stories that consist of a MC ruling over a small territory and such. And have to progress and defend.
What was that random bit about the robe?
GOOD CHAPTER.
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