Comments of chapter undefined of My Mage System (BL)

yea the wording is fine, the chapter made sense don't worry.

No it ended at the best part

Great chapter

Ohh Ian can get to experience a chiropractor. I just got adjusted today. It's fantastic. Hurts for a bit afterwards, but in the long run thank goodness.

honestly I think its a great chapter! at first I didn't even notice the choice of the word disrupt so I reread the entire chapter after rereading it I noticed it but I think it was fine or didn't know if there would be a better term for it, maybe disorder, but that depends honestly... ty for the update

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