too many typos and bad phrasing. the storytelling seems to be clairvoyant, it can tell what will be useful not what might. no depth, only description of actions.
I am sorry, I am leaving. good luck
And could you please explain why his hp fell so fast when he was only bitten in the arm and why his recovery is so fast.
Plus it was not told where he was first bitten that resulted in -1hp thanks
