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Comments of chapter undefined of A Kingdom Begins

LaziestDragon
LaziestDragonLv14LaziestDragon

nice opening interesting way of going with the Kobalt. keep up the good work time to binge until i catch up.

Lothran
LothranAuthorLothran

Hope you enjoy my novel.

The_Wandering_Alou
The_Wandering_AlouLv4The_Wandering_Alou

does this novel have kingdom building like really managing the kingdom? ex bulding cites, creating laws forming armies, politics, or just straight up RTS like kingdombuilding?

DaoistxJKU4A
DaoistxJKU4ALv2DaoistxJKU4A

Wait kobolts ? not kobolds ? wait what is it new race .. i . thought it was a lycanthrope

baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4baniel_stone

so this kobalt character is it full on dog face or is it just like a human face and dog years what's the ratio

SCP3812
SCP3812Lv3SCP3812

pacing is way too fast, i'd say do a whole rewrite but the story is too far gone

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

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CITYGIRL
CITYGIRLLv2CITYGIRL

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Handole
HandoleLv2Handole

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Aeser
AeserLv5Aeser

The writing could still be improved but it's a great start and no loopholes in the message which is great

Aeser
AeserLv5Aeser

Love this kind of concept especially the kingdom building part but I am wondering what your release schedule will be cause I'm gonna wait for this to have around 30 to 50 chapters then binge it