Amazing story but I’m sorry I can’t handle submissive MCs that get dragged around by the plot, sure her relationships may show that she’s on top but nope she’s most definitely the submissive one. She has no plan and just let everything flow. Reacting instead of Acting, this became boring really fast. The first Female Lead was handled HORRIBLY it’s like you just created her for us to hate her, she’s a mindless doll whose sole purpose is to be unlikable, she could be friends with the MC or even be neutral towards her but you just made her lose every ounce of IQ she had and made her become a 2D villain for first ML’s brother.
