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Comments of chapter undefined of The Losing Bet

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Rosnocht22
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The story line and plot have been established and are great. It's just some odd the words are used incorrectly and my brain has to adjust and insert/substitute the correct word/phrase. Once my brain makes the correction, I'm good. it just throws me off momentarily. But that's the only thing I see wrong. It's a great story and I really enjoy it [img=recommend] img

Noooona
NoooonaAuthorNoooona

thank you I will try to improve my skills