MaxwellKHA
author im not criticizing or anything but are you planning on making chapters more meaty. i mean im fine with you doing you its just creating alot of unintentional cliff hangers. on another note ballistic armor actually isnt that effective against piercing weapons like bows and swords. id recommend something like a stabvest or something to go along with a plate carrier. also im not sure if youre working on suspension of disbelief or not cause youre trying to be as accurate as possible when describing the guns. so id recommend something with a quick change barrel and the system to inform him bout cyclic firing so as to not overheat the barrel or weapon jams. it would also increase his accuracy as well as limit his ammo usage. of course with suspension of disbelief this doesnt matter.