Mein123142
Hmm, loving the premise. But isn't everything going TOO easy? I mean one speech (short and a bit abrupt one btw) and they all have pledge their allegiance already to some random stranger and nobody? I mean he was acting like the leader already without even having to prove or show any real capabilities. I dont know, to me everything was just a bit too fast. Why would the other leaders trust him already without even suspecting his background or story? for all they know, he could've been a conman or worse, a spy for the empire or some other shady organization that means to take advantage of them. all I'm saying is atleast build a real reason why they would follow and trust him already at this point, cause otherwise those followers will be nothing but brainless sheep without their own personalities and thoughts.