Comments of chapter undefined of I fell in love with my sister's boyfriend

im still new reading with this kind of genre but this one really caught my interest

Humm not a bad start for the book but I do have a suggestion. The writing would be a bit smoother if you removed I in every other sentence. When you are speaking to someone about your day you wouldn’t use I repeatedly. For example: After getting dressed and making my way downstares I saw my mom in the kitchen.

The style of writing and explanating is good.

bruh how much is he going to eat huh?😂😂 i think we would be best friends.😂

I was listening to music while reading it! It was a pleasant and satisfying read.

wow 😳!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola