Comments of chapter undefined of Marriage to The Mafia Boss

not a bad read, however I am not in favor of the POV on each chapter repeating the same thing as the previous chapter. I understand deleting those chapters would cut the book in half. I also think that there should have been more of a story line on mom, dad and the brothers. and maybe even on the mafia boss himself. just my thoughts on this one.p Thanks for writing it and please continue to entertain us with your works. please do not let my post discourage you in your work. thanks again.

It’ s sad that it came to an end but one thing I could say is thank you author for giving us your time & talent through your book. I reall enjoyed reading it. 😘👏

a nice stroy. keep ut up.

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