Poetri_cantique
not a bad read, however I am not in favor of the POV on each chapter repeating the same thing as the previous chapter. I understand deleting those chapters would cut the book in half. I also think that there should have been more of a story line on mom, dad and the brothers. and maybe even on the mafia boss himself. just my thoughts on this one.p Thanks for writing it and please continue to entertain us with your works. please do not let my post discourage you in your work. thanks again.