Witchhazel
I like it!! the imagery of the memory adds a lot more "show, don't tell" too it as well as making the readers experience the same sort of sad nostalgia that she is experiencing, and im really glad you kept the speech because it's really well worded and solidifies what she implied with the memory. I think it would be worth adding another kiss so you can keep the line of him saying "did that count?" because we didn't really get to see him respond beyond loosely accepting her words on a very hesitant physical level (and also because I really like that line xD it's funny, but also gives hope for his spirit returning a little)
this episode was do sweet omg... so gentle and full of love, and this apology felt like he was trying to genuinely make amends for their future rather than him just being sorry that he got caught â€â€ he's going to get better now that he's not resisting and suppressing the love that they so clearly share for each other đ„°