Comments of chapter undefined of THE ZODIAC SERIES : C A P R I C O R N (THE SHY PSYCHOPATH)

This is a good story. The idea is there. The only problem is the flow of the sentences. You have a good writing style. But you need to read the sentences out loud to yourself cuz you're having problems with words need to be added into the sentence or words being in the wrong spot. Other than that it was a good read. keep writing. Can't wait to see an update for the story!!