Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
LazySageDao
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My first time writing a comment cause I was so busy reading it for 2 days straight and the reason is that the world building was everything I wished in a Novel, what I like the most of these kinds of novels of kingdom building is that it gives me the imaginations of what's like to live in this kinda of world and I honestly liked the chapters of the citizen povs as it really correlates to the difference of what will happen once things change drastically for the better in a world, so i hope you do more citizen povs, when there is nothing major going on like all the main people doing research and other stuff instead of saying '5 years later' do it through the eyes of common citizen or a group of friends or a community or any kinda of a group of individuals other than the main people, so that readers can feel the impact of what they did to the whole world and relax now and then from the high intensity situations the main people are in constantly, just make it as filler chapters that really give a meaning to all the trouble things they go through otherwise it becomes repetitive like the cultivation novels without rest, so please write more in the future as stop signs for the readers to imagine what would it be like to live in such a civilization of high technology and magic, as you know mandane things can also be as entertaining and more than even the battle between Yehweh and Edward so try that please :)
Where will edward go next? If you can could you send him to limitless so he cantake the formula for nzt-48 a drug that permits you to use evry part of your brain to the max and if not to the limitless universe can you send him to the matrix one for it's technology especialy with the last movie that came out
