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This one was really great. Honestly one of the best I've read on the website. I love the kind of... powetic approach you took. (Best word I can think of) It reminds me a lot of books I used to read as a child. Less focusing on the characters or world and more focusing on describing the movement of scenes and characters. You really don't see that on this kind of website. And I really do respect that. When I write, I tend to lean towards character developement, and I know a lot of writers on here focus on creating the same fantasy world over and over. I respect that you decided to just... tell your story. You could've easily picked something that would of gotten you thousands of views, but you instead chose something that represents you and your style of writing. In some ways, I really look up to you as a writer. Keep up the good work!

From the first chap. You'll definitely know that this book is made by an authentic author. But let's get to business. Ahem *clears throat* this is amazing. So fr*@king good I love it. Its definitely worth the time.

The Pacing is just right and the quality is of a native speaker. I won't say much but the writings and wordings is even deeper than lord of the rings. It failed to be compared to it. Also, the words are engrossing and the story is enthralling. Keep it up! Hope more readers will read yours [img=recommend]

Wow. Absolutely amazing. AMAZING Writing quality. Amazing plot and easy to get hooked up. It's been a long time since I read such an interesting novel. Just hope the author update more chapters.

Wow. Just wow. This is a hidden gem on this site. I don't know what to say except that people should be reading this. Amazing job author really quite impressive ♥

I wonder how many times I had to look up at the dictionary! The depth of the writing is one of the best I have ever read. The pacing is nice and characters are equally intriguing. The theme of the story is fascinating. Adding this to my library for sure!

I've read the synopsis, and am preparing to read this story and I have to say, it sounds absolutely amazing mate! It's easily one of the most interesting sounding stories I've seen in a hot minute. Kudos to you mate!!

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

Absolutely mesmerizing! I love the theatrical visonary you use when the woman is running threw the woods, to when she’s at the gates dripping on blood. It really brings the fear and drama to a readers heart!!

The Writing was quite a treat. I enjoyed the luxury of the succinct descriptions and very vivid usage of scenery to depict a rather intense image to the reader. Something you don't often find while browsing webnovels is that large "description". The authors smooth writing and transitioning from there only serve to make a comfortable reading experience. I would recommend this novel to anyone really.

Wow, the comedy and romance here is quirky and sometimes deep. It’s a refreshing take on the romance genre and I can’t wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work Author!

I love your story. your writing style is unique. Your plot is strong. leading characters are strong. you have done a good job. keep it up...

Wow! Just amazing. I really enjoyed the plot, the story dynamics and the character design. There is something that just makes you immerse yourself in the book. Keep it up

The synopsis kinda took me by surprise tho....that's until i read it and now I'm hooked on this like it was a drug....you should be proud, this clearly what you call a masterpiece 💯💯... Loved it and I'll continue to love it.

Wow! This story is a hidden gem! I'm in awe of the way it's beautifully written and the way it describes the scenes and emotions that can make anyone who reads it imagine a movie playing in their heads. Great job author! Looking forward to more chapters [img=recommend]

Turn off the lights and you're in the movie theater with this one! Everything is of the highest quality. The world that it takes you to is unique and the detailed description of the characters is top notch!

The prose here is pretty incredibly done. This is not generally my preference in genre, but the vivid descriptions made it easy to get caught up in the action. It most definitely stands out from the crowd from that alone. The amount of effort here is apparent.

A very well-written story. Each character is painted in distinctive colors and the writing is descriptive and engaging. It grabs your attention from page one, and the mystery of what happened to Sabina makes you want to keep reading.

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

Absolutely good. Good plot? Check ✅ Good storyline? Check ✅✅ I really love the setting of the book and the prologue busted my head. Descriptive but not revealing. Such a good write-up. The only thing author needs to watch out for is the update. I saw that the last chapter has been updated since last month.

I love the beautifully described start of the novel, it gives me this full intriguing effect that lasted for as long as I kept reading. The determined personality of the lady was one that made me want to know more about the characters. A great novel!

The first thing I noticed was how detailed every description of each scene was. You can really feel the intensity of the moment that the author wanted to portray. Also, the mystery it was building makes you want to read more. It really felt like a published novel you could buy in book form.