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sweet_fruit
sweet_fruitLv13sweet_fruit

at the beginning of the novel didnt it say that jin was kevin’s rival and he is who jin was always trying to catch up to? has ren replaced kevin’s role in his life 😱

WhySoSerious7
WhySoSerious7Lv15WhySoSerious7

glad to see Emma was completely forgotten.

Tprop_M
Tprop_MLv14Tprop_M

It was a good chapter. Jin's inner monologue and how he actually feels was nice. I hope to see melissa and amanda's thoughts too. no need for that dumb girl's thoughts (emma) waste of energy. Need more character interactions to actually develop more depth to them.

Alfonz
AlfonzLv15Alfonz

Excited to see how he handles the situation with Amanda, I hope to finally see some form of prgression in their relationship

Cantnomore
CantnomoreLv12Cantnomore

Honestly, the reunion senerio was handled so much better than I could have thought. It's such a great emotional scene that's well done and thought out. Moments like this that catch you off guard are what make high-quality stories. Good Work Author Entrail_JI 👏 making such an amazing story!💯😀👍

Commusyou
CommusyouLv12Commusyou

T H A N K S F O R T H E C H A P T E R S A T I S F I E D but how about fourth chapter? H E H E H

Ryder1517
Ryder1517Lv14Ryder1517

I may be in the minority but I do hope we will see some character growth from Emma after everything that’s happened she hopefully would have changed some

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Leona_Lindemann
Leona_LindemannLv14Leona_Lindemann

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Tprop_M
Tprop_MLv14Tprop_M

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Alone_
Alone_Lv13Alone_

Thanks for feeding my addiction, i feel like i was on withdrawal for the past week waiting for their reunion

Mr_NonBeliever
Mr_NonBelieverLv10Mr_NonBeliever

when will the next chapter comes?

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Cantnomore
CantnomoreLv12Cantnomore

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Quang_Ga
Quang_GaLv13Quang_Ga

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David_Rafael_Tamir
David_Rafael_TamirLv12David_Rafael_Tamir

guys im sorry for being a bit out of context but can anyone direct me? the author said he maid an announcement about the trip. is there any community about 'author pov'?? a discord channel or a patreon? id like to join if so... can u direct me?

Dragons33
Dragons33Lv15Dragons33

woo-hoo! Thanks for the chapter. I love the relief and rivalry we got going here.

Elongated_Sedation
Elongated_SedationLv12Elongated_Sedation

Honestly, great work writing Jin's character. Really love how he's developed over the series

DrGrace
DrGraceLv14DrGrace

Missy_Rain_0120
Missy_Rain_0120Lv15Missy_Rain_0120

Thanks for the explanation on the scars. So only high potions remove them good to know.

DaoistwsE8Hb
DaoistwsE8HbLv4DaoistwsE8Hb

thanks for the chap.

Niggimasama
NiggimasamaLv11Niggimasama

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Rensea
RenseaLv14Rensea

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