So overall the fanfic isn’t Terrible but it’s mostly the mc himself that ruins it.
He ended up getting the fact that he was immortal and a multiversal traveler told to People, all because he put the phoenix force inside Himself, then he doesn’t think to erase their memories of the Event or straight up kill them, as that type of secret should not be Known by other’s yet he just let’s them know and tells them Way more than he should.
the mc is honestly pretty stupid and an open book, it doesn’t help that he throws a tantrum every like 2 chapters but doesn’t Really do Anything to change it, there’s also the fact that There is Way to much talking by the mc, like 90% of the chapter’s nothing happens, There’s literally like 5-7 chapters of shopping.
Knowing how author’s are nowadays this review will most likely be deleted, but if anyone see’s this if you like someone Incredibly open about their life, and a boring overall story then you should read this.
(This was written on my phone)
