dahnik
I like the way you put everything together just like canon but feels like not canon at the same time although some events pushed back but the results are still same-ish with the canon thanks for the chapter
correct me if I'm wrong. About Itachi *defecting* and joining Akatsuki, do you think that's a problem then? IMO, his sacrifice is one of my most favourites plots in Naruto
dahnik:I'm still learning how to write a story. it's much easier for me to keep my ff close to a story all my readers liked - you wouldn't be here otherwise ;-) I'm just fixing what I felt was the problem in the original one ;-)