Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness

There is nothing wrong with the pace of the story or the characters development. Keep up the good work.

I really love This story and The pace with which it goes forward😁 pls keep up your beautiful work and dont let stupid comments destroy it hinder your flow of This story

Hey man I love the way the book and the characters are progressing. Everyone makes mistakes and learns from them and honestly it's refreshing to see a MC making said mistakes. Don't change a thing good sir you have a great thing going and lots of people are loving it. Sorry the negative people tend to scream louder .[img=update][img=recommend]

I get that mc isn't perfect, but this is now like the 3rd time he's made reckless decisions without considering the consequences to innocent people, so I don't see him taking it to heart even though he always seems to be so heavily affected by it afterwards. Taking the ring from lion guild should have been him finding out he needs to consider the effects of his actions on others, since jessica gets killed and his merchant friends get targeted. Then he goes and instigates the uprising in the other town which will cause lots of innocent deaths and now this. I still don't get his genius plan to offend all the powerful merchants by doing 50% prices. What did he gain? He's not learning from his mistakes like you claim, so that's my complaint, not that he's making the mistakes in the first place or that he's going to get character growth that way.

I like the way the story is developing . keep up the good work. stick to your guns and don't add the unnecessary gimmicks of the other novels. your writing is refreshing. thanks.

Lol. Some readers just want blood~ I love ur story wherever it leads me~ I'm just your happy blind follower~ Author <3

I love Khan the way he is. Don't change anything about him.

People complaining when they're not the one making the chapters 😑

I’m sure that everyone who has read to this point is good with the progression of your work. If you change it that will make it predictable and will take away us being able to grow with Khan. He is the most believable transmigration MC I’ve seen to date!

thanks for the chapter :)

more more chaps

Good novel for antihero fan[img=update]

The novel plot had being in a good phase..keep going sir

Keep up the good work.

Gonna just say I like this book a lot so you keep doing you. Tho I may be 2 years late, I still wanna say I hope you don’t take the comments that lack sense too strongly, and if they don’t lack sense, then it’s fine if you think about it but don’t let it decide for you how to write your book. And don’t forget that there are probably a lot of readers who genuinely enjoy the book you’re making who may not comment very often (me). You’ll probably never see this but I hope you enjoy writing instead of just feeling forced to write.

I love the character development. one of the best I've seen or read in a long time. TWO THUMBS UP!!!

I love how this story's come along so far. it's kept me intrigued and I can't wait to read more. I also love how Kahn is doing and have no issues with this book. you've done an amazing job writing this and I love your snippets within the book as well thank you for writing :)

I hope you were sarcastic write your story the development is whats making it better