Comments of chapter undefined of The last heir of Dumbledore

I couldn't stop frowning while reading these past two chapters because of the MC's actions, the plot, his inability to keep secrets, every interaction with Daphne, Dumbledore and now Snape. And finally what is happening to the GRAMMAR?? It's getting worse chapter by chapter. I'm going to stop reading as it seems I can't stop criticizing your work. Still, I wish you the best and good luck.

Author, please be careful with the plot, the recklessness of the MC is freaking me out, he suddenly treats Grengrass like a bestie. He is even willing to steal the Philosopher's Stone for her! I really don't get it. Besides that, I love the book and you are doing a great job.

Really nice chapter. Though it does seem that Anthony puts too much trust in Daphne, I mean it's hardly been 2 months and he immediately gave her the book that basically labels him as a dark lord of found by anyone.

I think you should slow down and write slowly and surely. Thanks for the chapter

I have to leave it there are so many things wrong that it is sad to write it, what you did with dombludore seems too basic, my favorite character is by far the most intelligent and cunning, come on, he even learned to speak Parseltongue! and you make him look like a fool

thanks for the chapter and i feel the MC has turned an almost 180 because in the begining it was saying that he didnt want com0lication and being involved in the plot now its the reverse and he his to naive for someone who was thinking like that because he is sharing knowledge without protecting himself. am all for sharing some of his knowledge him harry and daphne but to make unbreakable vows to not share that knowlegde any way shape of form

moooooooooorre

Thanks for the chapter

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