Comments of chapter undefined of A Story of Imperial Ascension

Wow it is the only thing I can say for the start of this story. There were a few grammar problems but still readable and now about how he reincarnate It lack a lot of event. You should have added something to make a smooth transmigration between his death and the scene where he's auctioned . That's my opinion 'cause it was too abrupt. Then after this reincarnation it could've been better if there was a description of where he is or a description from a third-party like the narrator. For example, In a building beautifully decorated many people are regrouped for it seem an auction for rich people. On the stage can be seen a little boy caged (his features if u want .....) he seem to be the main attraction for today auction . Then back from MC pov. Sry for my poor grammar too. Anyway I just tried to give u a exemple :3 So that the story can be better and less short

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