Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: The Last Asari
Star Wars: The Last Asari
TheFallenAngel01
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ShaskaLv3Shaska
Author, from my point of view it is a serious mistake to start a story in this way, practically nothing is understood and the desire to continue reading is taken away, my advice is that for the next chapter simply make an explanation of who is the protagonist and where a system comes from.
TheFallenAngel01AuthorTheFallenAngel01
Should clear up that was a projection of what could be not what is. It was a way for the 'Goddess' to influence the main character There is no guarantee that the scenario will even play out this way. Knowing who the 'Goddess' is makes it clear that this scenario was way too easy...
Shaska:Of course, you can start your story as you see fit, I only gave you some advice since for me and many others it is very confusing, it is like starting to read a book from chapter 20 onwards.