Reviews of DUST BENEATH THE OCEAN

It's a great story. It's original, with some moments to make you laugh. The only issue I have had is it can be kind of dry at times, but it does not take too much away from the story

Ti2. hahahahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Go lang ng go. aja. Tiwala lang sa sarili. Never give up. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Just be happy 😊😊😊😊 💪💪💪💪👍💪👍👍👍👍👍

I was confused by the changes. But it's great! The pacing of the story becomes interesting. The story seems realistic. The problem, there's a lot of flash back. I want to read a story that always directed forward ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

Hello friend.🐱 Good luck for this... Just enjoy what you're doing 😉😉🤠 This is a good start already. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I hope you publish this in the near future. 🙏💗😘

Characters,... good... Flow of story... complicated, very complex. unpredictable...tackles problems in the society which make it original and realistic.

It's realistic 😛😜😜😜😜😜 Lot of characters that made the flow of the story complex. It covers certain problems that tickle my mind. Interesting in my point of view.🤔

Congratulations,sir for your novel! Nice one. I love the flow of the story, although quite complicated. I love Chloe, she's great here!😅. I hope she cN survive til the end.

Changes made is great! I feel excited to read the next chapter. I'm just a little bit curious in everything.😜 I can't predict the next event. It's very complicated story, then.

Thank you amiga for inviting me to read your novel. it's nice. good luck! you continue writing novels to inspire others. Pursue your dreams and never give up! mwaahhh 🤗 😘😘😘😘😘😘

The book is very playful in words. Some are highfalutin, anyway. I need to have a dictionary beside me. The story itself is a mystery a lot of questions bothering my mind.😂

🤔🤔🤔 The story is complicated.🙄🙄🙄 hatred, pity, sad, happy, betrayal, manipulation, superpower and many other emotions. a lot of twists and hidden secrets.☺️☺️☺️

The author has different styles. 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 You'll crave for the story as you practice patience in knowing the secrets hidden 😜😜😜😜😜. One issue I found is sometimes it too long to read.😁 But there are lessons in the story.

The plot of the story is unique! The characters are alive, it will really arouse your emotions. In fact, I hate Sassy so much.😡 She was very daring. I feel pity for Maia or Dianna,😢😭. Although there are some issues about typo and related cases but still understandable 🤠😃.

I like the detailed presentation of imagery, let say, the sky is thirty percent cloudy 😌☺️, very precise. The story is very unique in the sense that there are hidden irony,, humor, thrill and suspense. The thing that makes me continue to read is because the ending is unpredictable!

The descriptions of characters and settings are detailed. I hope not too much because sometimes it makes the story dull. ✌️✌️ But the story is very interesting, a lot of hidden secrets and mysteries in it that as time goes on, gradually, it reveals to the readers. I'm still not sure if how the story will end, I swear! 😁

The story is unusual. imagery is good, it will make u really imaginative. It's just confusing for their are a lot of scenes but challenging to read.

Wow.☺️👍. Can't believe you can write something lyk dis.☺️👍. Nice start. ☺️ just pursue ur drims and never give up,,, The story is unique ☺️.I don't know if it's really true or simply product of ur imagination 😂😂😂😂😂 Wish u luck! 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Ganun sa simula. minsan naman 🤣🤣🤣 inana Tapos, 😲🧐😲😲😲😲😳 Then sadness naman. 😟😕🙁😕😕😕😕 Then painful 😖😖😖😖😖😣😖😣😖😣😖 But nice story., vry orig. 👍👍👍👍

The novel is unique.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 Characters are mysterious 😉😉😉😉🙂🙂 The scenes are like stairs, escalating!!!! I hope that I can finish this 'til the end.