Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

and again a mc become a hermione slave. this sad

Why doesn't he fight back he already killed a troll so why is he scared of his siblings

Your writing quality is very good. Your explanations about spells are great also. I love everything about your fic, except his oversharing. You do know that flying is a game-changer spell, right? It's Voldemort's original spell and only his Death-Eaters know it.

I would say, great beggining, but since the troll incident.... to many hermione, and plot holes. I will give it another oportunity, let see a couple of chapthers more, but if I where the author I would consider rewriting

Hermione, Hermione, Hermione, this is all fanfic, man your story so far is very good and quite creative, but I've read so much "Hermione" that unfortunately I'm fed up with it, good luck with the story I'm coming out.

Do we have another MC here with no backbone whatsoever? Everyone continuously insults him and he just stays silent and pretends to be calm, when in reality he’s fuming inside. We even have people like Draco stepping on him😂

With hermione it will be the link to get involved in all the affairs that happen every year.

Its annoying that the MC is friendly with Hermione, I was hoping he doesn't really get involved with any of the golden trio

I love how submissive and pathetic he is SARCASM

Girl: I demand all of your magic knowledge. Mc: Ok here you go. Also, please take all of my self esteem and critical thinking too.

MC being friends with Hermione is ruining this well made fanfic so far.

It started good... sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Can you make mc kick stupid people in the nuts as according to me that would be more effective in defeating someone than magic

Mother will be happy.......

is hermione the love interest? Cuz hermione, daphne, and fleure are super overused. I don't really care either way, just saying.

Yo get rid of Hermione

Hermione is annoying

that was an awesome chapter I can't wait for the next one.👍😎👍

Thanks for the chapter, forgot about the twins existence Hopefully with their involment the MC will no longer get involved with Hermione.