Comments of chapter undefined of I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.

"Imperfection is the essence of God, for all in his entirety, all he could manage was three miserable wretches........." Cool book, having fun reading it....

okay this novel was well written but I feel like the first chapters were too slow paced for me as an isekai novel. You see, you need to hook readers as nuch as you can which is why mc gets transported in the first chap in most novels. Also, most of his thoughts, being pessimistic and cynical could be thinned down, and it won't affect the quality of the book. i feel like I was reading an article when i read the first chapter tbh.

Great... I can see improvement, but it's a little hard to feel the feelings after the sudden emotion change.

Kinda slow paced. But thankfully I'm into more detailed story! Liking it so far!