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Comments of chapter undefined of His Majesty, The King (HIATUS)

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

The fight wasn't big things, but that's to be expected from a novice author. What is not expected is the mc blatantly using his powers and trying to hide it with absurdly obvious lies. It would have been better for him to just admit to Kurenai that he was born with a special genkai kekkei that prevents him from using chakra but in exchange for some unique powers.

smol_benis
smol_benisAuthorsmol_benis

His parents are ordinary civilians, he can't really use that excuse.

MaybeShio
MaybeShioLv1MaybeShio

It was still a pretty good fight scene overall though it was kinda a little too one sided and you could of have kurenai perform a lot more genjutsu since i'm pretty sure in canon she had her team trapped in a wide range genjutsu and forced them to use their sensing abilities to find her. Though good job as expected from author sama.

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godlyarrogantz_305
godlyarrogantz_305Lv4godlyarrogantz_305

pretty nice fight scene

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanks

Phil_Morris
Phil_MorrisLv4Phil_Morris

thanks for the chapter

hostile_fire
hostile_fireLv13hostile_fire

great chap