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Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto With Gamer System

Ali_Rajabali_6124
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good story author but you forget this is your fanfic u can do whatever you want with the story although I'm unhappy with some things but i like it, let's see where this goes..u got my vote

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Kaiser0000
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You forgot about his save and load ability, if he doesn't use that to solve the problems that happen that's it for me.

Demonzor
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Im fine with everything except for the fact they let them just leave like that considering they where the elders and know almost every secret of the village

UchihaZenn
UchihaZennLv5UchihaZenn

Whoever the enemy is, our MC will always win because he has a save point. Thanks for the chapter

KILLER_Pineapple
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They would never let elders leave the village the clans sure but the elders no there’s like 100 reasons why elders can’t leave.

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Cara_trevoso
Cara_trevosoLv4Cara_trevoso

keep going with the history it's incredible right now

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Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

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zhokeyou
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Thanks for the chapter

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Alma_Night
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Thx for chapter

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Seraphel
SeraphelLv5Seraphel

thanks for the chapter

Zachariah_Browning
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He should put space locking seals around the village walls

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

Dude, I understand that it's impossible to keep track of obito and zetsu, but you can logically think and understand that they will 100% intervene in any eventuality, for example, you can just ask kushina and minato for help in blocking his ability or just signal specifically for obito, I just expected the MC to be more steamy in such a world, especially schnatoDude, I understand that it's impossible to keep track of Obito and Zetsu, but you can think logically and understand that they will 100% intervene in any eventuality, for example, you can just ask Kushina and Minato for help in blocking his ability or just signal specifically for Obito, I just expected the MC to be more steamy in such a world, especially knowing the plot

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

_Water_
_Water_Lv12_Water_

don't ninja who leave the village be classified as rouge nin, thus can be killed off without problems but civilians on the other hand... we dont really know escpecially the onces that come from clans.

Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv4Kancha_T

MC has Kushina and Minato helping him, so why doesn't he avail their talent and help to the fullest? Obito's kamui is a space related ninjutsu ain't it? Or that's what I think it is. Anyways, he could put barrier seals throughout Konoha right? Or if you the author have put this as a plot for Obito to hover over their heads? Also the senile elders leaving Konoha, what about the secrets they know? Are they doing anything to stop them from revealing everything? Here seals like Danzo put on his Root would come in handy. Apart from this the story is well written and let's see where it goes

MOREaderPHINE
MOREaderPHINELv14MOREaderPHINE

Hello author, I didn't read your rant TBH but you did amazing writing this fanfic Good job ! . Sorry for every toxic comment you received and hope it won't affect you. Continue your great work.

DetachedDreamer
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lol ya forgetting about the MCs main power is real convenient to allow, not only danzo to get away, but for the elders to act in the way they did. seems so forced by the author that it doesn't mesh at all. still an overall good story tho.

DaoistyPKqmt
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Rk6T
Rk6TLv4Rk6T

Well with mc changing things here and there, his future knowledge will slowly become useless with the only good exception being how much he knows about the important characters thus being able to come up with logical plans from knowing each character’s thinking process or personality. All u can do now is have mc steadily grow stronger and older while dealing with issues as they come.

Dispersium
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