Kurosawa_Taiki
If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.
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The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far
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awesome i love it so much.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................goodjob[img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan]