Comments of chapter undefined of A song of Ice and Fire : The World Emperor
A song of Ice and Fire : The World Emperor
Lukas_Blast
Chapter comments9
You need to divide your shit bruh and fix your grammar. Too long of a paragraph makes the reader not want to read
With the paragraph, I understand but with the Grammar is still a problem, I don't have time to learn English because as I mentioned before is not my first language and I work too much in the time of the week to have time to learn a language, I already learn German and that's a hard one, so anyone who knew that and still wanted to read, that's their own choice
Forgive me for my ranting author, it's just that I was expecting so much from this, and this was a let down. Theres hardly any good GOT fanfics and I was expecting something good here but mc's personality is annoying. Is he forgetting that he's a vampire, does he even drink blood. Maybe you should read the books dark wolf Shiro. Blood evil and dark, and that's what most people like not some idiot who'd die for his friends. Come guys realistically even in real life no one would die for their friends maybe even family but somehow this trash would, apparently becoming someone else made is iq down
