Comments of chapter undefined of My Demonic Fantasy

It's a good read, but since you asked for comments on your mistake... Well, it isn't actually a mistake, but rather a room for improvement. 1. I can't seem to visualize, your character. There's no description. What color is her hair, her age, her clothes. 2. I have no idea what's going on with the main character. Why is she getting these visions, and who is the mysterious man? Like I said, this is not a mistake on your part. Rather, these are just some points I wanted for myself as a reader.

It feels good to read this story

Loved reading your novel, there was magic in your writing: it was a pleasure to read your novel.....it must be published..... All the best for your future

The plot is....Everywhere. The grammar, forget it...It's on every paragraph. It's not your fault, english should not be your first language.

Ooh so she died? 😥 I guess she'll get to meet that demon now

Great work. It is a really nice plot. Keep on writing. Good luck

Really a nice story. Keep on writing. You have a good potential on writing.All the best

Loved reading your novel, there was magic in your writing: it was a pleasure to read your novel.....it must be published..... All the best for your future

great story development