Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Havenless Boy
Harry Potter and the Havenless Boy
Griif_Sanders
Chapter comments4
Hey in this story will it follow like hey I'm the best friend of harry potter and the golden trio and will follow then into every adventure they have cringey cliche or the much better keep your head down be a bit of a loner exploit the room of requirment don't act stupid nor show off until the 4th year(Also keep in mind major cringe points are 1.Cleaning the sorting hat with a spell and then giving a major explanation in front of the whole hall tryna loll smart instead makes me cringe from here 2.Speaking as if your a Gary Sue character and everyone else is stupid it's so annoying when mc will speak as if everyone else is wrong and purposefully try to get into arguments 3.Purposely tryna make enemies with some people as in Malfoy for no reason just to look cool Also will your Mc be Chaotic Neutral,Good or Evil(+1)
1) He's #1 Rule is to try and avoid getting involved with the Golden Trio as much as he possibly can however this is subject to change as much as any situation is. 2)Cleaning the sorting hat always just seemed kind of disrespectful to me so no he won't be doing that and for the most part he is an introvert so he'll avoid giving any form of speech. 3) To address Gary Sue, I'd say no one is perfect and as far as intelligence goes the character can only be as intelligent as the writer and I'm no genius. 4) As far as making enemies he won't be picking fights with anyone unless provoked for long enough. For the time being. 5) Finally as far as his alignment goes it's subject to change depending on what happens to him but as he is now I'd say he's True Neutral
