Comments of chapter undefined of War Queen

Very interesting 1st chapter! Well done!

Man so many relatable references this is one of the best things i have read this year and this is just chapter one😤😌

It's a rlly great start but, I would appreciate it if you could just break down the paragraph, make it shorter. it's overwhelming to read esp through the app

Great intro. You built up the emotion really well there, as well as the world background. I'm off to the next chap!

quite a intriguing chapter force your brain work i'mma head to next chap night now.

An impressive first chapter, the introduction is done impeccably even though it's still a mystery why the gods turn their backs on them

interesting chapter