Reviews of There was something here on the past.
There was something here on the past.
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this looks really fun till now i enjoyed it, the writing quality is good there aren't many mistakes, the Mc is super fun and the nuns omg😂 they all look special, i can't wait for the story to progress more and for freya to make her own crew, anyway i'm bad at writing reviews so just read it u'll like it. i just jope that it won't get dropped like so many fanfics out there
Я ещё не читал но почемуто хочу потдержать это произведение мне я как могу сказать зодёт а афтор наверное кротой чувак со своими вкусам ну кароче я читать (да это мой комент на русском) I haven't read it yet, but for some reason I want to hold this work for aftor, I'm as offended as I can tell, and the author is probably a cool dude with his own tastes, anyway, I'm reading
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I’m really enjoying the story so far! Its really interesting and funny to read how the chracters interact with one another. The Mc has an out going personality, and isnt one to shy away from confrontation. If anything they might love it, throwing out curses to destroy her opponents! Theres yuri too, and thats always a plus in my book. I hope to see more of this and I think the author is doing a fantastic job if handling all of this and learning about English at the same time! But overall I’d say this book is definitely something thats worth trying!
Nice start! Gotta admit, was a little worried about the characterization because of the swearing and how you decided to present the mc in the first chapter but wow~ it's been quality content since then author, keep the good work and don't drop this! I want to see what shenanigans our little pirate creates in her journey.
i love the book. I like the personality of the characters, it makes them less flat and it's easy to get attached to them. The only thing that I do not like is that sometimes they seem to go around in conversations without reaching the point in question (something that irritates me a lot personally when a person does that to me)
